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OC: Ninh
Appearance
[X] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Blue and purple)
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race
[] They are emo/cutesy
[X] They have wings
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (gloves. for some reason)
Subtotal: 2
Relations
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They have an evil nemesis.....
[X] .......Who is their sibling (Andypachu)
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents (his family didnt survive the z-apocalypse. technically, he didn't either)
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 1
Race/Species
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[X] But they struggle to be good anyway (doesnt act like an angel)
[X] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[X] They are part/half/hybrid mythical creature (Half angel)
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 3
Powers
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[X] They have a special ability/power (Healing when really needed and can make portals to heaven)
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal-cannot be killed by conventional means
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 1
Mentality
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities, x2 if this is shown to be funny
[] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 0
Miscellaneous
[] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Ninh isn't a name you would hear everyday. Its actually a vietnamese name.)
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live (he left his town)
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum.....
[] ....They come from two such lines......
[] .....,Which have been at war for all of history.......
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way, my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (so far, it's permanent)
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 1
Total: 8
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[/] They enjoy bullying others (Eh, a little.)
[/] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 2
Final Total: 6
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.
26> -Mary-Sue
This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
OC: Ninh
Appearance
[X] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Blue and purple)
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race
[] They are emo/cutesy
[X] They have wings
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (gloves. for some reason)
Subtotal: 2
Relations
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They have an evil nemesis.....
[X] .......Who is their sibling (Andypachu)
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents (his family didnt survive the z-apocalypse. technically, he didn't either)
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 1
Race/Species
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[X] But they struggle to be good anyway (doesnt act like an angel)
[X] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[X] They are part/half/hybrid mythical creature (Half angel)
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 3
Powers
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[X] They have a special ability/power (Healing when really needed and can make portals to heaven)
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal-cannot be killed by conventional means
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 1
Mentality
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities, x2 if this is shown to be funny
[] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 0
Miscellaneous
[] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[X] They have a rare/unusual name (Ninh isn't a name you would hear everyday. Its actually a vietnamese name.)
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live (he left his town)
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum.....
[] ....They come from two such lines......
[] .....,Which have been at war for all of history.......
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way, my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (so far, it's permanent)
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 1
Total: 8
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[/] They enjoy bullying others (Eh, a little.)
[/] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 2
Final Total: 6
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.
26> -Mary-Sue
This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
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Ninh's embarrassing and mediocre new webcomic
Here's a big project that I have been working on for a while. This was originally gonna be an animated cartoon but that would be overwhelming for me and setting the bar too high. https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/digital-miracles-volume-1/list?title_no=317816 Its called Digital Miracles. Its probably not that good. Keep in mind that I am new to writing my own stories so don't expect it to be amazing. Criticism will always be accepted. HOWEVER, make sure its actually criticism. Sounds silly but saying something like "That characters looks weird" because that's just not enough and is not a very valid piece of "criticism" to me. To me, saying something like that will just make you look stupid, blunt, and sometimes even a bit rude. Please go in depth with your criticisms concerning this series or I will likely delete your comment(s). If you're a good friend of mine then you might see your character in this volume or some later volumes. I hope to finish this series instead of
Something that's been bothering me...
Hello.
Please check out GalvaArtsyTime (https://www.deviantart.com/galvaartsytime). He has been one of my closest friends for years and his art has improved a lot.
However, it sort of bothers me how his work doesn't have too many views. We're not forcing anyone to look at his stuff but we would really appreciate it if you were to take a look. You might be really interested in him as an artist or friend. It's sort of a shame that some of his drawings that are pretty high quality only have around 7 views while some people can post a photo of their food and get thousands of viewers and likes.
Feel free to talk to him too. He's a pretty nice guy and you may even share a lot of the same
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got it from me, did ya? xD
you forgot to delete stuff in the "unattractive" part, just tellin
you forgot to delete stuff in the "unattractive" part, just tellin